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Really cool! I felt like I was barely keeping up, and somehow didn't want to, because that guy was nuts :D

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Thank you Lisa! I’m probably going to write another one of these at some point so hopefully I can match the technique to a protagonist who’s a touch more appealing for you......

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This was hypnotic! I almost felt like I was being reprogrammed towards the end...

It's rare to read something where form and function are so in sync. Brilliant 🙏

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A story about speed that goes so fast you can barely catch it, so genius!

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Thank you! I'm hoping it's not so fast that no-one can read it........

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I could, but I also felt like that was kind of the point yes?

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Yes! But there’s a very fine line between being fast and unreadable dependent on the audience and it took me a while fiddling with the tech to get it right.

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I thought it hit perfectly for what the piece was!

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